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Annieguile Bentulan's avatar

Great pacing and tension! The chase through the canyon was intense, and I loved the light humor that gave the crew such personality. The camaraderie between them really stood out. I’d definitely want to see more of their story if I had the time! but best believe it is saved for future reference.

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January River's avatar

Great writing!! Tight and action-oriented…I’m going to reread and take notes!

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