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Ashes Of Love Poetry's avatar

I really love this story. The way the narrator believes his own delusions and thinks he's doing what's in her best interest. Blaming her for looking at him. Imagining this connection off of one single moment of eye contact. Dreaming about her and spiraling to a point where he confronts her. Only to be enraged at what he procieved as lying and teasing. It's so layered that it doesn't feel so fictional.

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DOMO CAMPOLO's avatar

Really dig this. Deffo down my alley 🤙

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Happy Nielsen's avatar

Omg. Apparently every genre under the sun is your wheelhouse becuase wow. 😳

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Todd Anderson's avatar

Great story, and I loved the title! Love is blind on so many levels….

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Maryellen Brady 💗📚's avatar

Pools of molten starlight, tinted with the ocean and pain....omgosh you held my attention & proceeded to creep me out. So good!

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John's avatar

What you asked do, a therapy session.

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Autumn Kindelspire's avatar

This is awesome horror! I love how the tension builds and you think you're in one kind of horror story but then -- like a really good rollercoaster -- just when we think we're going to fall forever, it twists to the left. A hard, sharp turn. Like a blade twisting in your guts. Well done, friend.

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John's avatar

You need more that one. 😎

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Sean Nordquist's avatar

More than one what? :p

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