London, 2022
Have we met Cai before?
Well done on the church setting. You did some research.
“Crowd” not “crown.”
I hope you’re going to follow up on the stories where you leave the reader hanging. What’s in the will?
Wally Williams? 😁
Wally tapped his glass to hers. “To Grandma. I hope she is giving Saint Peter a stern talking to right about now,” he chuckled. His voice cracked, and he quickly wiped a tear.”
Omgosh 😢😭🥰
Have we met Cai before?
Well done on the church setting. You did some research.
“Crowd” not “crown.”
I hope you’re going to follow up on the stories where you leave the reader hanging. What’s in the will?
Wally Williams? 😁
Wally tapped his glass to hers. “To Grandma. I hope she is giving Saint Peter a stern talking to right about now,” he chuckled. His voice cracked, and he quickly wiped a tear.”
Omgosh 😢😭🥰