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Joshua Kay's avatar

Terrific stuff! Hoping you’ll write more, because I can’t wait to see what happens next!

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Michelle Bernier|FantasyAuthor's avatar

Haha. Love this. As soon as I figured she was looking for something, I had a feeling there was a fun job involved.

Although at first I admit I thought she was there for having been employed by Ahmad. Very good twist.

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WS Ribelin's avatar

“Just a fat bro in a suit”. ha ha wonderful

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Gillian Fletcher's avatar

Ooh, do I ever want to see where this goes from here!! Awesome premise!!

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